Or to the past, because Harvard’s prompts are a blast from the past, especially if the past is the old Common Application Prompts.
The prompts that Harvard has up this year are a mix of old Harvard prompts and the prompts that your older friends or siblings wrote for the Common Application if they applied in recent years. I’ll analyze the prompts separately, in order, right after this message:
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And now, here is my Harvard analysis:
1. Briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences. (Required, 150 word max, Paste in).
150 words is not much space, which reinforces that this “essay” prompt is meant as a chance either to elaborate on material you (hopefully) already listed for them, or to describe an interesting aspect of your life that merited essentially a footnote in your application or that is not visible at all. Choose wisely, by which I mean, look first for ways to offset weaknesses and next for ways to play up strengths that may be apparent in your application, and choose a topic that shows a person who truly is curious instead of a person who is merely trying to look as if he or she is curious .
If you appear to be a stereotypical asocial math and computer whiz, try to find a way to talk about something else–your stats and classes should already show your prowess in these fields, supported by your transcript, so maybe you should talk about your love of windsurfing or (harmless) flash mob organizing. If you are weaker in math, find a way to offset that–your love of philosophy and logic, through your sideline, studying Zeno’s paradoxes, or perhaps your organizing skills or ability to find your way in the dark without a compass. Be creative.
It’s fine to repeat things that are prominent on your “resume” so long as you are truly and deeply enthusiastic about the topic you choose. You can sneak in some other things by showing, for example, how your interest in Topic A lead you to Topic B, the subject of your essay here (or paragraph, probably).
As for essays on work, I wouldn’t necessarily say not to write about your job flipping burgers, but you might want to give it some heft. Try reading or at least perusing Barbara Erenreich’s Nickled andDimedfor some ideas on how to add depth to an essay on your fast-food/entry-level side job. Internships will hopefully also provide fodder for an intellectual experience essay.
Now let’s look at the remaining prompts as a group, with links to topics that can be used to address the prompts:
2. You may wish to include an additional essay if you feel that the college application forms do not provide sufficient opportunity to convey important information about yourself or your accomplishments. You may write on a topic of your choice, or you may choose from one of the following topics (Optional, 1300 word Max, Paste In)
– Unusual circumstances in your life
– Travel or living experiences in other countries
– What you would want your future college roommate to know about you
– An intellectual experience (course, project, book, discussion, paper, poetry, or research topic in engineering, mathematics, science or other modes of inquiry) that has meant the most to you
– How you hope to use your college education
– A list of books you have read during the past twelve months
My first advice is this: You should, of course, write this extra, “suggested” essay. You do want to avoid overlaps with whatever common app essay you choose to use.
Turning to new developments for this year, Harvard has for the most part just rearranged some words from last year’s prompts. The prompt asking you to write a letter to your future college roommate was introduced last year, and is either borrowed from recent Stanford supplements or great minds really do think alike.
This year’s prompt on an intellectual experience was added as a word change to a similar, earlier prompt and is much broader than that earlier prompt on an academic experience, which it replaced in 2012. Academic limits you to school and maybe that internship or research project you did. Intellectual does not limit your topics as much. Music, film, rock climbing, almost any serious human endeavor or experience can have an intellectual aspect to it, if you look at it the right way. Books, of course, are an ancient source of intellectual experiences and these will be a specific focus in this post.
I will start you with links to some of my earlier posts which specifically address Harvard or relate to the prompts for 2013 that relate to or could be topics for this years prompts. These posts will help get you started as you generate ideas.
I address the list of books essay in a separate post–this essay can take various forms, but avoid just making it a list of book blurbs; find a way to tie the books together, based on some sort of shared idea or other connection. The posts below should help you get started with a book, travel/experience or letter essay:
Writing About Books
Writing About Books II
Writing About Books III
Writing About Books I
Travel or Living Experiences
My main warning is to avoid the stereotypical “My Trip” essay, which takes three forms: 1) shallow travelogue 2) travel experience with a “life’s lesson” forced upon it 3) Patronizing description of people with odd habits living in an exotic place/poor people living in an exotic place. It’s incredibly easy to sound patronizing when writing about other countries and peoples and you should never forget that, in writing about another place, the subject of an application essay is still you. Be aware of what you are revealing about yourself.
How to Write About a Trip While Not Tripping Over Stereotypes: Evading the Cliche II
College Essay No-No’s
Writing a Letter to Your Roommate
Consider Your Audience Before Writing Anything: So You Want to Write a College Essay
Stanford Essay 2011, including brief advice on Writing a Letter to Your Roommate
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This prompt should tell you that Harvard holds leaders in high regard. Here, they test your self-knowledge as to where and how you can help fit society’s needs. In a similar way to Prompt 5, they are trying to see the type of graduate you will become.
If leadership has been central to your life experiences, be sure to make note of those roles here. Be picky when deciding what roles to highlight, though! Make sure the group you led has something to show for your leadership (whether that thing be tangible or intangible).
For example, if you helped a club on campus better the culture of its membership, talk about how your leadership contributed to that. If you helped a diverse set of teammates come together for a common goal, discuss what aspects of your citizenship helped bring everyone together. Your goal here is in two parts: create an assessment for your personal leadership skills, and address how your community or society has benefited from it (more than simply pointing to trophies or awards, this is intended to show how society itself can change because of you.)
Make sure you showcase your leadership style, and how you believe it was effective. More importantly, make sure to show why you think it will be effective in the future. Remember, this essay should relay back to you as a graduate of Harvard!
One strategy could be to build up your leadership skills, then direct them to a specific area where you feel inspired to change society. If you choose this route, be specific in terms of the needs you can fill. Ask yourself: What qualities of a leader does a good lawyer need to have? How does citizenship help you be a good engineer? Most importantly: How do those necessities in those positions lead back to who you are?
Remember to answer the other aspect of the question. Besides being a good citizen-leader, how will you be a good citizen? Admissions officers want you to discuss how you would be an important part of something greater than yourself. You could use an example of something you did as a part of an extracurricular activity of which you were not the president or the de facto leader. For example, if you built an app for a conference your town was hosting, helped organize logistics for a school recital, or even volunteered at a food bank throughout high school, this prompt would fit your experiences well.
Harvard finds it very important that the citizens of their learning community come from diverse backgrounds, allowing students to learn from one another. Think about how you can add to this environment of diversity, or discuss your experience in a diverse environment in relation to your citizenship within it. Essays about discrimination or inequality in your community, and your development as a citizen-leader as a result, could fit well to this prompt.